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The Revision Bench

NO SECOND DRAFT TODAY
Q1 Imagined Narrative: Second Draft Prep Day. Nine moves, three steps, one first draft.
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Today you're a mechanic, not an author: you're marking up your first draft on paper to get it ready. You will not type or write your second draft today.

Bring to your seat: your first draft (paper) · a pencil · this page
Missed class? Start here

Second Draft Writing Toolkit: full walkthrough

A 5-minute narrated recap of the whole toolkit: story mountain, figurative language, sensory details, sentence types, and fixing run-ons. Watch this if you weren't in class, then head into the 9 moves below.

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🎬 Start here: how today works

Watch this first, before you touch your draft.

▶ TRANSCRIPTS: every video's narration, for reference or captions
About these videos:
  • Each square's video is narrated and was built for The Revision Bench using Baird Middle School branding.
  • The transcripts below match the narration word-for-word, useful for a student who missed a video, or if you want to re-record any square in your own voice later.